HERESY : AN EMPTINESS WITHOUT FLAVOR - yonkoma #78
Published by Kyuken on November, 3rd, 2023.
An Ylevol Oog is in the middle of a sexual relationship with a male entity
with a deformed right arm to fill her Emptiness without Flavor.
Hello Sinners, (^_^)
An Emptiness without Flavor is a title that characterizes well my feelings with the previous episode (Yonkoma #77 - Shampoo).
I wanted to go too fast and do too much for a first story.
Looking back, there are way too many characters and too many details with little explanation,
a real Hell in creation for an amateur leading to an Emptiness without Flavor. Or rather a taste of disatisfaction,
that something was wrong.
So the only way is to reread and to annotate what has been done over the past 4 years.
Then check each of the narrative pieces to sort out what is finished and what needs to be resumed to conclude.
With the next episode, all the actors will be on stage, all I will have to concentrate on the design of the future battlefields.
A few weeks ago, I had lunch with a friend who gave his opinion on my work.
Where I find there is too much emptiness and not enough decor, he found it logic because it serves the story.
Since the characters evolve in Helfreija's Hell stripped of everything at the beginning of the project.
Seen like that, it was a good reminder.
Having an outside opinion can provide another vision and indicate I may be on the right track.
Although the path is twisted and imprecise, it is a very enriching while having fun.
Erosu MOe KOwai Sinners ! (^_^)